Once again, I am a strong YUKI supporter, so your KYO~TOHRU match doesn't appeal too much to me..
Your scene with Hatori and Akito was well written. Continue with the great work!
Best Luck for the future,
fooddude_lista
Author's response
Lista, you obviously plum crazy... round the bend... senile... etc. Kyo is much cooler than Yuki and that's final!