I. Love. This. Story.
Seriously.
I think I just smile the entire time I'm reading it. Giggling Patrick, cocky Pete, adorably cute Joe, and of course hottie Andy with his eye on the girl in the leopard print... you've got it all. I gave you a 'funny' but I was very close to ambiance. Update soon!!!
Author's response
Reviews like your just make my day. You make me want to write all the time, just to get super-duper review like this. Unfortunately, work calls (cause a girl has to eat!) But I will be updating real soon. xxxxx