You update quickly. Once again, I liked it. Davey and Jade are in it! Keep continuing, you discribe well, too. :)
Author's response
haha...thanks! i'm glad that you like it. i think i know what will happen next...but i'm not sure. i have too much time on my hands so i probably will update a lot. and i love to write. Davey and Jade rock so i put them in there. lol...i'll probably add more characters not sure who yet though.