I have been reading this story straight through. I don't know how I didn't come across it before, and I usually wait until the end to post a review, but this chapter was so amazing, I couldn't wait. The other person who said to have more chapters like this one was soooo right. It would not have been the same without the closet scene. More closet scenes!
Author's response
I'll work on the closet scenes, even though I don't think they're my forte. ;)