Woo hoo! I'm liking this alot, liking the characters. I often find that when people include themselves in fics they can end up abit fangirly but Gabby(you i suppose!) isnt like that at all.
Also i love how you've put pics on your profile. I love to be able to get a picture of what authors imagine their characters to look like.
Overall great chapter, keep them coming.
PS Immortalise me in fiction! My profile will tell you all about me....