Review for Sisters

Sisters

(#) CoraLiz 2007-01-31

Oh, Gwen! You know, if the Sisters find out you wrote this, we might send YOU out into the woods. Be afraid. Be very afraid.

Otherwise, nice story. It took me forever to read... you probably should have broken it down into parts or something. But it was still super-dooper amazing!

Author's response

Yikes! Don't throw me in the woods, it's cold out! Besides, you know you all love me too much...

And for some reason I was set on having it all one story/chapter. Breaking it up felt funny given the topic. I thought about cutting it in half right when she hears about the F&F but then the first half is all action-based and the second part all lovie-dovie. Glad you liked!