Review for Fifty Snapshots of a Descendant of Achilles

Fifty Snapshots of a Descendant of Achilles

(#) Demenior 2006-05-08

"Accuse
As helpful as Hope had been in the battle against the plague from Pandora's Box, and as pleasant an abstract concept she was, the others couldn't help but find her the fault of the annoyingly hopeful high Archie had been in for at least a week after the fight at the reservoir."

That one, to me, seemed to be the funniest and I do agree with pretty much the entire story. It was funny, enlightening and believeable. Good job on this one!

Demenior

Author's response

Strangely enough, I think 'Accuse' was one of the words I had the hardest times trying to write a sentence for, so I'm glad it worked out in the end :) Thanks very much, and I'm glad you thought it was good. And I swear I'll get around to reviewing your story eventually -- I've so far been putting off reading other people's long fics until I start mine because I don't want to subconsciously copy anyone.