This has major literary quality. (Even though, I am probably not the right person to judge that... shrugs)
Very impressive, very ambiance-y. It's going on my favs.
I loved how Sophie thought about Andy all the time, starting when she got up to when she was in the woods. I always feel when you mix some action with the character's thoughts, it takes the story to a whole new exciting level.
Take a point and please write more. You are seriously and dangerously talented. :)
Author's response
You are WAY too nice to me. Honestly. But I will take the point and cherish it always. :)