Review for It can't be

It can't be

(#) gucci84 2007-02-01

Ah,that sucks. Not the story, the fact that De's parents are dead. The story is good, but I can't place at what age they are. This is when they were much younger right?

Good stuff. Next chappie will be up soon I hope.

Can't wait to find out which excuse Al will use for not wanting to tell Delilah.

-Gucci84

Author's response

hey thanx 4 the review and i was thinking they were about 16 and 17 years old, and i'll try to update but i just got a new babysitting job and its like right after school but i hopefully will update Friday night

-Porsche