question; is this a one shot?
it was so-so in my oppinon. i wasnt too fond of the doctor suse way that you wrote and explained things, it seems unnatural, illiterate. i dont know...
another thing; i think we've all read this exact story before; at least i know i have. The one where the two boys like eachother and things work out perfectly. maybe i just have strange taste but it seemed too bland
i hate to be and/or sound like a bitch when reviewing, i just think that reviews are ment to be honest and some what critical at times to make people better writers. hope you understand
Author's response
Yes, this is a one-shot.
Thank you for being honest in your review. I believe that's the point of a good review as well and I appreciate your honesty.
Mmm.. There probably have been similar. At times I know I can get a little clichè with my fics. Probably one thing best to be avoided.
Also, about the writing style I used in this fic; I thought I'd give it a go to see how it turned out. Maybe a little too different and yes, maybe a little too illiterate. I can see how you would find it to be the way you did.
But, yes, thank you for the review and your honesty. I appreciate it.