You definitely protray Pete in a humorous way. I can just see his "shit eating grin."
I loved this update. I'm going to sprinkle some ratings on it now.
Author's response
I occasionally go to write something, then I'm not sure whether they're totally British and no one (except Katy) will understand what the hell I'm talking about. So, good to know. We get so much American TV it's a bit vague now what came from where!
And thank you thank you for the sprinkles xx