I also think you should add onto this story soon because your writing style and technique probably astounds everyone here. Keep up teh awesome work, Demenior!
Author's response
Wha-what? Wow... you've just flattered me to the MAX... I honestly don't think my writing style is that great since there's a lot more I could improve on, but thank you for the compliment and I will keep up the good work! ~Demenior