Review for Just A Click

Just A Click

(#) story_master 2007-02-09

Hey there!
Awsome chapter two! I think I reviewed on fanfiction but I'm not entirely sure so if I did hope you don't mind me reviewing twice. Like I said awsome chapter! It was so cute and so sweet. Well not the part about Atlanta thinking she wasn't good enough but how Archie comforted her and made her feel all better. Not many people show his sweet side, me being one of them lol. So it was a very nice touch. To answer your question... YES YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! this story rocks, it's definitely a favourite. The idea has been used before, but like you said you don't care you're just practicing your writing. And isn't everyone's idea taken from something anyways? It's just how they twist it and change it, right? But I think that you bring a very nice and original touch to the idea. I like how you added in serious events that real people go through. It was really well written. I can't wait for the next one! Please update soon!
~Tory;D