Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) FallOutGrl 2007-02-11

Oh my god girl!!!! This just keeps getting better and better! And Patrick is such a sweetheart. Even if Ava is a bid childish while drunk....but hey, aren't we all? Lol, keep up the good work hunn!

p.s. Rating Point For You!!!!

Author's response

Aw, thanks! You're absolutely right about the childish drunken part... I think I modeled that aspect of Ava after myself (or at least what everyone tells me, lol) Thank you for the point!