Ach... Not being able to rate SUCKS.
This was one of the your best chapters to date, Gwen. I think you got the drunk part across really well.
First the model thing disturbed me but I'd be a hypocrite if I held onto that feeling. ;) It's reassuring to learn that somebody who can date (or whatever) Patrick Stump is insecure about her looks. ;)
Sorry that this review lacks sense but that's what happens when I try to multitask. Just know that I still think you're one hell of a writer. :)
Author's response
I'm sorry about the disturbing model part... That is the result of actually HAVING those stupid pictures up around my own apartment (my roomie and I are aparently preparing for spring break in this manner) and a severe case of writers block. And thank you for all your kind words, I always look forward to your reviews. :)