Review for Falter


(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-13

I think it's a great start! I would probably be a little frantic if I thought my bf was going to break up with me just because he was going on tour... I guess that just gives proof that it wasn't true love. And I think my girl Ava and your boy Oliver are related... hmmm, Lemmings. lol. :) Anyway, on to the next chapter!

Author's response

LOL. be honest I didn't even notice the same name. I had asked my friend for a last name and that was the first thing that had come to her mind LOL. I will go back and change it though, thank you!