Review for Falter


(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-13

Ach! Oliver is too sweet! Seriously.
I think my favorite part was Peyton singing to the cd and Oliver giving her a strange look... I've been there too many times; singing loudly in the car/people embarrased etc. Anyway, Patrick better step it up because I'm starting to really like Oliver. ;) I can't wait for more!!

Author's response

Believe me, his sweet act is just a game for now lol. It never lasts. The car scene actually took place in my friends car, hence the reason for it, I just couldn't help it. Patrick will be definetly stepping up his game...especially in the chapters coming thank you so much! Your too sweet!