Interesting indeed. Not bad for having written it at work. And I didn't notice any errors. Mine are usually overrun with them...so I'm not a reliable spell check, I guess.
That Patrick. I want to believe he'll redeem himself in an incredibly sweet manner, but at this point, I don't know if he can. That was pretty low. And that girl could have the syph...or crabs...or something itchy. Shame on him.
Author's response
yea...I was going to have the girl be Allison, but there was a very violent reaction from both of my 'advisors'. Apparently their lives would be made better for never having to hear from the evil blonde again.