Definitely not too melodramatic.
It was perfect. It put Molly's flaws on display just perfectly. And you must know we all love the drama,yes?
This must be getting tough on you and I totally admire that you manage to consistantly produce quality chapters. There's no such thing as a filler in this story. So well done, and keep it up xx
Author's response
Thank you so much. seriously that means a lot. One thing I'm always afraid of is if people are going to read a chapter and go "that wasn't necessary". I sit there (for hours sometimes) trying to inject some form of substance into each chapter--essp with how long the story has gotten filler would be annoying--
I'm a bit of a drama "whore" myself, but I know people don't always like it. And I feel as though I've lost that humor edge that the first part of the story had (I'm trying to bring it back but the subject matter doesn't exactly lend itself to being humerous)--so I hope no one hates that too. I litterally eat, sleep, and live this story and my job (which thankfully includes shows or I'd cry) so yea it's getting difficult, but I'll perservere. A friend of mine was like 'dude you need to take a break' 'cause we were at dinner and I started discussing upcoming plot points with her. But I seriously can't stop writing it--those 2 weeks of writers block were actually painful.
so it means so much when I hear that people love my baby. lol. Ok done patting myself on the back. gotta go book a stage...'cause I just got talent and have no where to put them. eeeep.