Review for Harry's Return

Harry's Return

(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-16

Thisis an interesting story. You need to read it yourself. While you did use spell checker, you need to check the context of the correctly spelled words, such as using to instead of too, and using where instead of were. Additionally, you need to check your comma and semi-colon usage as well. I don't want to disuade you and hope that you continue your story.

Geovanni Luciano