Review for Falter


(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-18

Ah! The bells! I loved how you kept going back to that little joke. I also loved how you brought texting into the story. Patrick and Peyton are getting a little closer! Yay! And what exactly is the 'it'? Bottle could mean anything... first I thought alcohol, then I thought maybe it was a bong of some kind, then my mind went to pills... you have me on the edge of my seat my dear and I can't wait for more! Have a point and off with you to write another chapter!

Author's response

I know the bells!! I just had to throw that in there. It wasn't planned at first...but I had to find a cute way to end it, cause the next chapter is pretty rocky. And that bottle will remain a mystery for awhile...insert scary music here lol.