Wow, you know, for never expecting that ending in the LAST chapter, you sum it up so very well in this one! I'm so very impressed with your writing, Alex!
Anyway, for not liking Brenda very much in previous chapters, you really make me feel a little sorry for her in this one. It makes me wonder how this 'love triangle' of sorts will play out. And I'm so glad Joe stuck up for his friend Carl! :D You make me smile.
And I hope all is well in your personal world; we all need to take some time away from Ficwad every now and then.
Author's response
I am glad it didn't come off as too far-fetched. I felt a little explanation was due but wasn't sure if I did it justice. So thank you for the reassurance. :)
Yes, how will it play out? YOU HAVE TO TELL ME!!!! Oh well, I'll think of something. I hope.
Thank you. Then again, ficwad can be pretty encouraging at times. :)