hey,
i'm caught up on this one. let me tell you what i think:
1.) why do i reserve lists for you? gah, off subject. anyway.
2.)A Joe story. I like that it gets beyond the fact that he has a speech impediment, and that he's actually a good guy (taking it slow with Brenda, feeling bad about Carls situation ...he's sympathetic and i like it). But he's still has his flaws. you write joe like no other. seriously.
2.) you gave CeCe a cameo. she was wicked-cool.
3.)dax is amazingly adorable. i can almost picture his cute little beagle self.
4.) i don't really know if i like brenda. i have this part of me that feels like she's cool, because she's so self-confident and comfortable with herself, but this other part of me feels like she's just not right for joe. only time will tell.
i really don't know what else to say right now. i promise more with the next one.
p.s.:you're amazing.
Author's response
Ah, you spoil me today!
It's because you know how lists turn me on. Almost as much as your hair...
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment extensively. :)
P.S.: You're insanily plonktacular.