(#) Geets 2007-02-24
very good! its very different to how it was before, but i like it! its better actually; i prefer it, lol! update... smokey? lol!
Author's response
thx. its really werid cuz larry and i have totally different writing styles and i didn't even know where to continue after her chapter 3 so yea. anyway she's mad at me for some stupid reason so it might be a while till she manages to update our story.