I'm gonna make a list...otherwise I'm just gonna forget everything I thought about while reading this chapter...
1) Thank GOD I have my internet back; I just caught up on everything you've posted in the last couple weeks or so. Annnnnd, it's amazingly amazing and I'm SO happy about where this is going. Yee-haw. (No, I'm not a cowboy?...)
2) About the interviewing/journalist thing...I hate it when Panic! looks so serious on interviews and you can't decide whether or not to believe them when they say something totally out of this world. =) Glad you put that in your chapter.
3) I have some constructive criticism for you...(don't worry it's just a SUPER minor thing, and I'm just being stupid about it...) I know you're English (my dad's English too, lol) but I think it could make your writing even better if you could try and write in American slang, because 'fancy' and some other typical British terms aren't very...well...American?
4) You have to freaking update, because if you don't, my mother will scream at me for waiting in front of the computer every day for something I won't tell her about. =D So make me happy (and my mother happy) and UPDATE!
5) You're awesome.
xoxoNatalie
Author's response
yay, im happy its back too, lol!! THANKU!!!! god, i love u 4 reading my story!! lol, they do tend to look kinda serious, but they dont like interviews at all. hehe, thanku, it was another random thing i felt like putting in. yay - constructive criticism! i havnt had any yet, lol. ok, ill giv it a go, but tell me if its totally wrong, ok? i watch enough american programmes to sorta know how u talk! lol. did i say fancy? i cant remember!! LMAOOOOO - ok, we dont want mother getting angry. ill try to make u happy 2DAY! if i can :D thanku! ur awesome too!