Oh, I have dreams of reindeer who say shit all the time. ;)
Great story, and it made me laugh out loud. Just one tip- you don't need to keep writing [[theese things]] because if the person was actually interested in the story they read the thing and know who's who.
CONTINUE, PLEASE!!
Author's response
lmao. i was going to take [[those things]] out in chapter two, but i decided to give them one more go. im glad that its making people laugh. =D. i love your stories as well. and ill make sure not to use [[these things]] anymore, i wasnt sure though. and ill surely continue! thanks! byebye now.