Review for RANDOMISH PENCILS

RANDOMISH PENCILS

(#) MarkPoa 2007-02-25

Can you tone down the shouting a bit? Thank you. Oh, and try to give this a little more editing. There's a good idea in this someplace, but the writing style makes it hard to enjoy it.

Author's response

DUDE IT WAS A BIT OF FUN

LEARN 2 LIVE A LITTLE

JUST ENJOY THE UTTER RANDOM CRAZYNESS