Review for Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On

(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-27

Alright, I know who Dax is. But I can't wait to learn more about Petra and that Ethan guy.

You set up this first chapter wonderfully, very intriguing.

Anyway, as for the murder mystery: I think the delivery man did it!

Love you and udpate soon, wife! :)

Author's response

Thank you Mrs Wife, good luck with your exam. Thank you for my review, you always make me feel alright with everything, even when I'm scared...