Review for Harry Potter and the Quest for Pieces

Harry Potter and the Quest for Pieces

(#) Alorkin 2007-02-28

An interesting, funny and somewhat confusing story. I can easily see Luna as Harry's mate. Even in canon she seems more able to understand his soul than even Hermione(and being a dedicated H/Hr shipper I have just damned my soul to hell for blasphmy!).

I have only a small critisizm here. You should have someone you know, read this over. There are many places where the story snags on repeated words, incomplete sentences and occasinally the misspelled word. Other than that, this is a very good story. Alorkin

Author's response

Well, another awesome review from you. I do like them when someone puts more thought into what they are reviewing. BTW, not to pick on you too much, said the pot to the kettle but blasphemy is spelled as I did to the left. :) I'll look it over. This was a flash idea that came to me and I wanted to pursue while putting Season of Hell on the back burner for a week or two while I got my thoughts together over the birthday party scene. Ultimately, I like this ship as a primary one, and having heard Dan Radcliff's hint to Harry/Luna I thought it deserved some exploration. This will not be a multi or harem story, and it will be in depth. Thanks for your review, again.

Geovanni Luciano