Review for Forbidden

Forbidden

(#) zaberdeenz 2007-03-01

eats cookie and muffin happily
then goes on reading the chapter
founds out about Lyn
hunts her down and throws her into a trashcan
now that that is done.. chapter was awesomeness and you make the characters equal personalities which makes this great.
tried to sound smart
so anywho, keep it comin as soon as you can[:

Author's response

Ok don't get fat on the muffin and cookie. I'm hsppy you enjoyed the chpater, I'm glad I'm getting everyones personalities across coz I don't want the whole story to focus just on Gee and Chey(even though it is mostly about them)Thanks for reading see you soon.