FicWad

oh no. what did shay do? "i'm sorry" never equals anything but trouble.

first of all, i thought i would be able to tell what parts katy wrote and which ones cece wrote, but i can't. this story flows seamlessly and you two are amazing together, in a completely platonic, creative way.

list time:

1.)i love sues notes. i like the narrative it's written in because it makes us analyze the situation at hand as well. good job, ladies.

2.)shays interaction with the children is very genuine. she takes interest in them, and it's kind of cool to see the grown up rory. i loved him in the first one, so it's only natural...

3.)i think it was good to show a weak moment for patrick with bee. it's realistic that he wouldn't/couldn't always remain faithful in the situation he is put in.

4.)damn pete. i don't know what it is, but i'm waiting for an explanation on that one misseys.

that's all i have right now. i love you both!