good story, but a lot of typos. The very first chapter had some point of view errors as well. I could make out what they were though. If you want anyone to read your stuff before you post it for proof reading, I'm willing to help you out! love the story line though...
Author's response
thank you. I'm from sweden and not very used to write in english and I always do a lot of mistakes when I write on the computer. If you want to help me it would be great.