The CDs and DVDs that just proved that they had two completely different tastes when it came to music and films, but Caroline had been willing to give each single one of them a try. I badly related to this because I've done that.....
/If you became addicted to something you became vulnerable.
/ Say it with me: Amen. lol
I love the present and past flash backs through this chapter two, they flow so smoothly and are absolutley essential to the process that Carl is going through....We never really had an insight to their relationship, this was perfect...
Dax trod into the living room and wagged his tail upon spying his temporary distributor of food and caresses sitting on the couch, Ha! I feel like that with Pheebs....
The short tour had been just what the doctor ordered. It had allowed him to transform his anger and frustration into physical energy. This was superb. A way to dodge writing about anger and all that 'emo' stuff...hahahaha
I liked how this chapter ended, it kinda felt like when you've been holding your breath for ages and all the pressure gets forced into your head, and then you just let it out.....wait....that's cos that's what I was doing....Silly dork....
Author's response
Thank you very much for this lengthy review. I was hoping you'd give me your okay on the whole interpersonal business that's been going on in this story. I can't say I'm familiar with all the situations in here, but some where written from my own experience. I hang out with Trohseph a lot, ya know...