FicWad

She figured that's what love was though. The feeling of elation and misery in one glorious moment. Great line, such wisdom in one sentence.

They got off the car and Arissa let her breath catch in her throat as she looked up at the mass of brick. She stopped as they came up to the black iron gate surrounding the yard and looked at Pete again for reassurance. Opening the gate he nodded for her to go thorough and she did. The front door was big and white and far too close. She slowed and breathed deep. The windows were large and the steps to the porch were waiting. Yeah, I loved this paragraph, your descriptive writing is totally brilliant.

I rated this as ambiance because the whole chapter was full of it.

This was excellent, I'm interested so much in why Mommy Wentz is being a cowbag. Also,I liked the fact she saw all of Arissa's flaws first, usually they take a while to come through....

Great chapter - if people don't leave reviews, it's only cos they're lazy and no other reason. Trust me - I'm worst for it - ask my wife....(frostedglass/Alex/Austria) haha.

hearts.

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