Ok, I must admit that I read this yesterday when you posted, I was just one of the lazy ones who didn't post. :) But it wasn't because it wasn't GOOD! I thought this chapter was simply fantastic! I actually felt the tension... If that had been me in her situation, I don't know how I would have handled myself, but you did a great job at showing how uncomfortable the situation was. I'm completely impressed and anxiously await your next chapter!!!
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Aww... Good to know. I didn't mean to make you feel guilty or anything. I just felt funny about the chapter and when I didn't get reviews I was ready to delete it. I was like REWRITE! I'm glad everyone thinks I'm descriptive because I don't think I am that descriptive. I can always see where improvemets need to be made. I loved writing that one because I sort of challenged myself. I might do it again soon... There was pressure, but it was really GOOD! Thanks for the review! More soon!!!