Review for The First Time

The First Time

(#) Genericrandom5 2006-05-24

Not your usual fair, and not your best work, but I don't feel to have wasted my time or anything similar for having read this. I think that it might have been better served by being longer, or focusing more on Ranma's reaction to actually having killed, but it was a decent work. Not great, but pretty good. As always, I look forward to anything one of my favorite authors puts out in the future. Maybe another Eva story, or a continuation of your current one? Regardless, keep it up.