Review for Conversation


(#) Maldoror 2006-05-24

The pacing of this short fic is great; the way we discover Gai's actions sparsed in with remembering what Jiraiya said. And the sober lack of angsty words at the end made it more effective. The restraint and Gai's simple actions are touching.

There are a few typos. Delicate, not delacate, genius not genious, warrant not warrent etc.