Review for Broken Down On Memory Lane

Broken Down On Memory Lane

(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-05

I was going to start this review out with 'Yay!' like I have a tendency of doing on occasion, but I see a number of people already beat me to it... and I've never been one to copy. :)

Well, I thought this was so good! I can't believe Patrick just left that note on her pillow and snuck out- back to the evil girlfriend... oh, wait, that's fiance, my bad. Patrick really has no clue, does he? lol.

And I feel really sorry for Kate! She is in SUCH a tough position... trying to please her brother while not wanting to hurt herself even more by having to see Patrick- engaged no less. Yeah, that would majorly suck.

Anywho, I thought it was put together nicely as always. I get so excited to see that you've posted!!! So post more soon!!! Points, points to you my dear! (Ok, I'll lay off the '!'. I know I can be a little creepy like that. lol)

Author's response

patrick is clueless to the max, lol.
but we both knew that - yay for Kate being a badass and yay for rating points.
(see i added yay's for you so you didn't feel like you missed out on anything. lol)