Review for Broken Down On Memory Lane

Broken Down On Memory Lane

(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-07

Again, so 'EXCITING'! I'm practically bouncing in my seat.

AND OMG!!!! This chapter was just full of funny things. You know, I just realized who Meg reminds me of... You know that movie School of Rock with Jack Black? Ned's girlfriend? Yeah, that's who Meg reminds me of... all bossy and pushy. And Patrick needs to grow some balls or something. Meg is terrible. Can't he see Kate is just perfect? Of course not... he's blind when it comes to that stuff... Though he IS a total ass in this story, I still have to love him. You do a good job of not pushing past that line- where we're still irritated with him, but we still want him to get with our leading lady. If he was too muach of a jerk it wouldn't work. Awesome job!

And Pregnant???? It's totally Patrick's. He's going to have to come to his senses soon. And Kate needs to get a pregnancy test asap.

Sooo... I know you've already produced a lot in one day and while I fully appreciate your hard work and dedication, I'm still a very selfish being wanting MORE!!!!

Author's response

OMG YESSSS she is totally like that chick, that makes me laugh.
lmao, preggers maybe i dunno.
ok well yes i do know the answer but my lips are sealed.