Oh my frickin' God. I just read this entire story. It took the better part of a week, but was it worth it. WOW! You give me hope that someday I can write, too. Keep it up and update soon.
Thanks for taking the time to read this story. You can be a writer, trust me. Just try, write whats in your heart and don't take any shit from anyone. Never give up. Thanks again. - SanDee