Whoa. Absolutely whoa.
I printed this off and read it today, I was utterly absorbed in it. Don't ever be discouraged by a lack of reviews or anything stupid because ( I'm just gonna go ahead and be an ass kisser here) You're writing is immense, yes, immense, I used that word in a totally inappropriate way and guess what, who cares if my sentence structure is up jack creek here either because it's all in the name of giving you ego and ensuring you write more as soon as possible so I can just get out of my system what ever it is that your writing makes me feel ( and breathe....)
Arissa intrigues me, Peter is a hero and yes, need I be reminded by Ducky down there (yes you Apple face) that she is in fact having sheet tug-o-war with Trick....
I am loving this story, it's plt, it's ambience.
Less haste - write....Now..
grins
Author's response
Um... I love it when words are used wrong to compliment me. Means I have you in Aww. Can't even think straight...LoL! I'm just kidding. You really are too sweet! I'll write more ASAP. I've been really busy with work and stuff. Soon though! Really, Thank You!