Wow, this is really funny!
And the part that Harry start imitating the well (and only) know exit of 'Right Said Fred' was simple hilaryous! i was laughing for hours! xD
and, it's really cool the way you're trying to put your story into the "canon" story, you know? i liked a lot that... and a lot of detail's i've missed in this review, but anyway... god story, i hope you can continue it soon :)
Thanks for share it
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PD: And Dyas sound almost like "días", the spanish for "days" you know? ;)