you made me smile and giggle so many times while reading this chapter! first of all, Amber was so funny when slamming the door repeatetly on Bob. LMAO and i like that you dont leave anyone alone, all boys have their girls. stares at the sentence, doesnt like it,but leaves it there anyway but you got my point right? Bob and Amber are nice together too, cause they're both kinda shy, but still such cutiepies. and for some reason, i have no problem to imagine Gerard Way saying 'dildo'. ROFL btw, its was so cute too when Gee was so proud of his cooking.
then lets get to the dirt. to the little special piece of trash called Lyn. i hate her. and thats good, cause you know, you can write characters that are sweet to hate. but we have to get rid of her, she cant come and mess up with Gerard.
grabs Lyns hand, drags her to airport and throws her to a plane to South Pole sits back and waits for next chapter [[:
Author's response
I've been waiting for you grins broadly. Gosh where do I start with this review. Dildo-I wasn't gonna write that in and then I thought if Gerard can say he knows how to ride the mechanical bull, then I can write that he says dildo lol.
Special piece of trash lol you have a way with words, what a lovely way to describe someone.
I'm glad I'm getting everyones personalities across and I love writing Bob and Ambers parts coz there relationship is so cute and new...for now mwhahaha. Anyhoo I gotta go now, thanx to someone(no names mentioning)I have to go to the southpole and get Lyn back coz she's in the next chapter runs to the airport