Can you say 'perfect'?
Because that's exactly what it was. None of the unnecessary, and certainly nothing smutty, which some of us are guilty of a lot of the time.
The emotion was the important thing here and you portrayed that perfectly.
Well done, sincerely.
Author's response
You know I'm glad you noticed that I tried to make it semi tasteful. I'm not very good with writing tha kind of thing, but I wanted there to be a chapter like this one. There kind of needed to be one. I'm glad I conveyed some kind of emotion that you picked up on. Thank you for the great review!