This is one of the more enjoyable stories that I have read in a long time. This is a different Harry that is completely different from other Harry's in other fics these days, one who is enjoying life and knows how to help others enjoy it as well. A couple of things that I feel have been lacking so far; 1. Interaction with Ron. Now I know that this is more of a Harry gets the girl(s) fic, but Ron has been a major point in his life. Has that changed? 2. Lack of Hedwig. Has she been totally put off by his change? All I've got for now. Anyway good work, entertaining, oh and a way to make the change-overs less jarring put in an indicator of time or location change ('Later, in the Snake Cave...')
Again good work.