I almost fainted when I read the words "Archie", "Is", and "Dead".
Seriously, I mean, it's like my stomach dissolved and reformed with all the wrong bits. Oh, man, you really captured Atlanta's soul at the end. Great, now it's me sounding like a great block of cheese, not Archie. Thank goodness it's just a story. pants
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Awwww... Thank you. You made my day. :D