Review for My Ran-neechan

My Ran-neechan

(#) yuko-chan 2006-05-29

you know, i kinda had almost the same story in mind (it was set at night in a playground near ran's house). you beat me to it.

uhm, your story well...didnt have much impact on me. ran was too stubborn and shinichi gave up too quickly.(maybe you should create a..sequel) better luck next time??