I completely agree with MCR Dynamite, giving concrit is one thing but that review was just plain out of order. Writing is a form of expression and can be interpreted however you want.
If you dont like a piece then dont read it. Plain and simple. A good reviewer gives advice, not flat out criticism and abuse. Whoever you are you seriously need to grow up.
As for the story, i think it promising, its got a great plot and i'm interested to see where its heading. XX