(#) RAJR 2007-03-19
Well, I am impressed so far. I have read many different stories where Bella is Harry's mistress, wife, etc., etc. I have never before read one where she is Harry's mother. I imagine that you will want more than one review, but I will request that you continue with the story, as you have captured my interest now. I have always enjoyed the dark, but not evil independant Harry fics, and I am assuming that this will be one of them as well. Keep up the good work, and, if I may, the chapters could be a touch longer, if you can fit them all together and make all the chapters work properly. Keep up the good work!