Review for Harry Potter and the Innate Malapropism

Harry Potter and the Innate Malapropism

(#) LeRob 2007-03-20

This was good for a laugh, Jeram. The first chapter could use some cleaning up, maybe, but the second was really quite funny, once I figured out what you were trying to satirize. You didn't call Hedwig 'girl' enough, though -- I expect to see that in future chapters, along with the wondahful powers of house-elves.

LR.